Comments on: Ocean Pulse http://www.ornaross.com/2009/02/ocean-pulse/ Go Creative! It's Your Native State. Fri, 27 Jan 2012 09:45:46 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.4 By: Maria http://www.ornaross.com/2009/02/ocean-pulse/comment-page-1/#comment-985 Maria Tue, 10 Mar 2009 12:55:04 +0000 http://www.ornaross.com/?p=592#comment-985 Orna, I love this. It's like all your writing.It seems to be simple but there's more going on than first glance.I really love the last line.Thank you. Orna, I love this. It’s like all your writing.It seems to be simple but there’s more going on than first glance.I really love the last line.Thank you.

]]> By: Steve (Honest Abe) Manning http://www.ornaross.com/2009/02/ocean-pulse/comment-page-1/#comment-921 Steve (Honest Abe) Manning Thu, 05 Feb 2009 23:45:45 +0000 http://www.ornaross.com/?p=592#comment-921 I cannot see the ocean. My creek serves the same purpose... Mountain Stream through Fairyland Boulders in a stream interrupt continuum of flow since its first dawn sprinkled jewelglints on tumbling acqua droplets. Larger rocks channel the rush towards gaps speeding up to catapult and arc ballistically, eddy, carve dirt, rush on. Flat rocks become playsets for children, waterslides to cooling pools, steppingstones for fastidious puppies who do not care to drip from well-groomed coats. ... I cannot see the ocean. My creek serves the same purpose…

Mountain Stream through Fairyland

Boulders in a stream
interrupt continuum of flow
since its first dawn
sprinkled jewelglints
on tumbling acqua droplets.

Larger rocks channel the rush
towards gaps speeding up
to catapult and arc
ballistically, eddy, carve
dirt, rush on.

Flat rocks become playsets
for children, waterslides to cooling pools,
steppingstones for fastidious puppies
who do not care to drip from
well-groomed coats.
…

]]> By: Orna Ross http://www.ornaross.com/2009/02/ocean-pulse/comment-page-1/#comment-917 Orna Ross Wed, 04 Feb 2009 04:58:32 +0000 http://www.ornaross.com/?p=592#comment-917 Only in my imagination and memory at the moment -- It was longing sparked this! But soon again, soon. Only in my imagination and memory at the moment — It was longing sparked this! But soon again, soon.

]]> By: Karen Lotter http://www.ornaross.com/2009/02/ocean-pulse/comment-page-1/#comment-914 Karen Lotter Tue, 03 Feb 2009 12:35:57 +0000 http://www.ornaross.com/?p=592#comment-914 You're really grooving on the sea? I glad you're feeling so good. You’re really grooving on the sea? I glad you’re feeling so good.

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